This is a short novella with a start, diffenrent possibilities in the middle and an end.
I do not like this Darcy and I do not like this Elizabeth. Elizabeth in inmature, not grown up and silly. Mrs Jeffers can do much better than this!
But there are a few thoughts in this story wich are good and are seldom told: is Elizabeth the right one to run Pemberley? Does she know what it means to be mistress of such a big estate? Does she know anything about responsibility after growing up in Longbourn walking and reading the whole day?

I read it again and still agree with my last journal entry.